Revenge is the worst thing someone can do. Revenge can lead to someone getting hurt worst than you or it could back fire.In my book V for Vendeta my character Valerie tried to get revenge on the people that killed her husband, and it back fired. Valerie ended up going to a fake jail and getting her hair shaved off.She ended up losing her mind.
Valerie tried to get revenge because people killed her husband.She got the idea to go after the people who killed her husband when she found her husband gun in a drawer.It was wrong because she really loved her husband, and he meant the world to her.
It was wrong for Valerie to try to get revenge because it back fired. When she went to the fake prison, she lost her mind. There was only one guard and she thought she saw at least ten of them.They shaved her hair and while she was there she found Vendetta. He made her realize that she wanted more in life.
In real life revenge can only lead in someone dieing or getting hurt.
Isiah,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you gave an overall statement at the begging and then at the end it was a more specific statement.
like roy said, i like the statements that you made! i could tell that you put lots of effort into this. good job
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