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Thursday, April 19, 2012

1       My two favorite blogs are Gabe's and Oscars Gabe's on pythons and Oscar's on plagiarizing.

      I like Gabe's because I also think pythons are dangerous and people don't understand the damage they can do when they grow up instead of throwing them in the wild they could give them to a reptile zoo are so. I thought that Oscar's blog on plagiarizing because you could go to jail or worst for it and he's right if your going to copy it cite the web site and who wrote it, just write about the topic in your own words differeent.

      I think that i could improve on writing longer paragraphs and including beater details on my blogs. I think i could do what oscar did and write in seperate paragraphs like making body paragraphs. and last i think i could do like gabe and write all the posabilities of what would happen or might happen.

2     M.S. Galang is right allot of teachers are right they do reconize plagiarizing. They can eseacially reconize it if you write like an child and when you write sophisticated. He/ she could've wrote the source at the bottom of the page near the article. there are three ways to avoid plagiarism is for one don't think about copying something of the computer the teachers will find it. Second always write the web site you fond the information or write the person you got the info from. The last way to stop plagiarasm is to do your own work if you have a hard time ask a teacher for help.


     

Thursday, March 22, 2012

Much ado about nothing

      I thought Much ado about nothing was funny and interesting play. the play had some funny parts that kept me interested in it and even though there was some funny parts they kept it serious so there could be some sad and some important parts too. the parts that I liked was when the detective's came out.During the play a part that I didn't like was the beginning of the play when they were being introduced. lastly I thought that when the people tried to frame the mans daughter made it more interesting.

Thursday, March 15, 2012

Act 4

      Act 4 in Romeo and Juliet we meet a new character Friar Lawrence, in scene 1 Juliet is kinda wondering if she should or shouldn't marry Paris but Friar is helping her with her decisions. Scene 2 is about when Capulet and lady Capulet are talking about a party the next day, to get 10 cheifs that are good ornaments and what they should wear, Juliet and Nurse enters and Juliets talk to her mother saying that ive sined and lady Capulet says how instead of the party your going to church. Scene 3 Juliet tells how she feel to meet god the next day and she takes a vial thats supposed to help her but she probaly thinks that Friar got to it and poisoned it. Scene 4 when Capulet make sure that the food is alright and they talk to Paris Nurse wakes Juliet and trims her. Scene 5 Nurse tryies to wake Juliet but she thinks shes dead then she calls everyone else and they all try to wake her but she don't wake up. 

Romeo & Juliet

      From act 1 scene 1 in Romeo & Juliet  It really shared allot of info on it with how all the characters act and how they care for or hate the others around them. like with Gregory and Sampson they were the first two characters in the book and it showed that they are two servants for the Capuletsand they want to kill the Mountagues and rape women. Tybalt is a mean man who really wants to kill Benvolio, Benvolio is Romeos cousin and he really care for his family but he still can fight if he needs to. Lady Capulet is Juliets mother who wants Juliet to marry Tybalt, the Nurse Is like a second mom to juliet and she really care for Juliet. And last Abram is the Mountagues servant who fights Gregory and Sampson.

Monday, February 27, 2012

Comment

      I like Gabe Blog on Stephen because he really goes into detail about it and the different parts that liked/ popped out. Like in his second paragraph he noticed that the first stanza really caught his attention. It says I see a little boy of four or five whose face lights up whenever we would play who made me feel its great to be alive and wish that time would never tick away. he really put allot of thought and meaning in his opinion of Stephen.
      
      I also like Santi comment on another sonnet for Stephen because he also put what he really thought the story was about to him. he also put who he think the point of view is from andb how it compared to the others.

Thursday, February 16, 2012

Sonnet The Heats

Miami Heats can defeat any team
They're only fourteen & Six but they rule
When the Heat rivals play them the get creamed
When the Heats beat them it is very cruel
They only lost Six games but their still good
Their still good players even though they lose
When they win they give stuff back to their hood
Every new game they are the ones to choose

Dwayne Wade is my favorite player
Leborn James has the most points on the team
When he score it keeps going up like layers
If they lose to the Bull's it's just a dream

Cross over spin offs layups give you're all
The Miami team Heats will never fall

Thursday, February 2, 2012

Leonardo da Vinci

     Leonardo DA Vinci was born in a small Italian town of Vinci in 1452. when DA Vinci was little he started drawing pictures of insects, plants, flowers, animals, and birds. Leonardo lived during a time when people in Europe were becoming interested in art. Leonardo was not only a great artist but he was also good at being an Architect, Musician, Sculptor, Scientist, Inventor And in Mathematician. Leonardo wrote his notes and plains backwards so that no one could steal his secrets. He studied nature so that he can use them in his paintings and make them realistic like the picture The Virgin of the Rock.

      The photo that I Chose was The Virgin of the Rock. I chose it because its very descriptive and it has a lot of meaning to it. the picture has rocks surrounding it on the outside and its like it could close in on them. In the picture it shows two women and two baby's and they all have halos except for one who has angel wings. In the back of the picture it has mountains and steam the steam makes it look like its a waterfall. One of the baby's have a golden cross in between his arms and hes on his knees with his hands touching like hes praying. the last detail that's in the picture are the flowers that's every where even on the mountains/rocks.

      I think porsanally that the picture stickes out because Leonardo made it so reallistic and peaceful. I also think that the halos angel wings and the golden cross helps it look so peaceful and magical. The river & the moutains help it look secretive like no one else knows about it. The flowers and the cloths that their wearing make it decorative.